by klampet
Very good story. I really liked the later level of submissiveness. I hope it isn't "The very end" but hope to read many more chapters. Thank you.
Great second chapter.. but I'm curious, why is it in the Incest category? There wasn't any in the story? Keep it up, hopefully Cyn will be getting the dom of her dreams, but continuing with her staff, esp. Sarah. There is much more than an employer/employee relationship there.
Incest? Did I miss something? Nice series but only getting 3 due to false advertising.
If you are going to use colloquialisms, check them out!
Example - "... chocker block ..."???? NO!
Chock-a-block'!
Remember that the incest category also has taboo lumped in, which is probably what the author is aiming at.