All Comments on 'Power and Corruption Ch. 04'

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Qwer12Qwer12almost 2 years ago
So Fun

Such a fun a playful story. Great writing and these ladies are such fun to read about. I do think it is time for Lela to get some of her friends new talents and get it to feast on her sweet pussy. Cheers

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

okay this chapter was okay just okay. The club scene was good just not long enough, needed more description of the fondling by the girls while dancing. bed room scene is getting a little repetitious she starts fucking only to be stopped for a licking then sleep. Somehow Hanna need to find out the bigger isn't always better especially if you want to have fun in other places other than a bedroom. smaller holes, tighter holes could be used for games in public places. I think Claudia needs to come clean about everything to Lela so that Lela can use her as well. Pappasleaze!

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I have quite a few stories that I never finished writing. A downside of an overactive imagination, I suppose. Maybe I will share some of them here and see if people like them. That might help me find the discipline to finish them. I'll post updates about the next chapters o...

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