All Comments on 'Power of Persuasion Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Great second part hope there is more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

Now that's a chapter! I can't wait what you think up next

zena99zena99about 10 years ago
Oh yeah

This tale needs to be continued.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Next chapter

When is the next chapter coming out? Best guess

dreadpiratenobearddreadpiratenobeardalmost 10 years agoAuthor
update

Hopefully in the next couple weeks. I have several directions in my head to take it. Where would you like to see it go?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

more chapters please

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
too bad...

I just discovered this I hope this will continue... or is this how the story ends?

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More of this hot story

Love the idea of making others submit to my will. Love to read how you requested they shave each others pubic hair on web cam and become cyber sluts carrying out orders from internet site

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

When might we get new chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
One problem

I like the story but my problem with it is the $300,000 a week? When they make $650 a year. I think you kind of got lost in the detail here. No? 4 Stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

One problem

I like the story but my problem with it is the $300,000 a week? When they make $650,000 a year. I think you kind of got lost in the detail here. No? 4 Stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
This

This was fucking perfect

irishblue0irishblue0about 9 years ago

I enjoyed this story both chapters. I did feel that may be some infidelity on Maria's part that was not addressed.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
loop hole

Since they remember the commands, but may never speak of them, wouldn't the wife simply write down what has happened to her and mail it to the police????

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More?

Can you write more, please.

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