All Comments on 'Power of Persuasion Ch. 02'
by dreadpiratenobeard
- 15 Comments
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoSince they remember the commands, but may never speak of them, wouldn't the wife simply write down what has happened to her and mail it to the police????
irishblue0about 9 years agoI enjoyed this story both chapters. I did feel that may be some infidelity on Maria's part that was not addressed.
Anonymousover 9 years agoOne problem
I like the story but my problem with it is the $300,000 a week? When they make $650,000 a year. I think you kind of got lost in the detail here. No? 4 Stars
Anonymousover 9 years agoI like the story but my problem with it is the $300,000 a week? When they make $650 a year. I think you kind of got lost in the detail here. No? 4 Stars
Anonymousover 9 years agoLove the idea of making others submit to my will. Love to read how you requested they shave each others pubic hair on web cam and become cyber sluts carrying out orders from internet site
Anonymousover 9 years agoI just discovered this I hope this will continue... or is this how the story ends?
dreadpiratenobeardalmost 10 years agoAuthorHopefully in the next couple weeks. I have several directions in my head to take it. Where would you like to see it go?
