All Comments on 'Power of Purple Pt. 01'

I really like the idea. Keep it up!

Not bad at all. Got a good story line going and I how you keep it going.

A good start, remember that there is more to sex than furious fucking

Baseline is set time to let that power rip...... Fuck the good people, like have orgies and enjoy sex...and fuck up / fuck with the bad people. ie: turn her skinhead thug boyfriend into a glory hole cum dumpster. Making him so proud he posts his exploits for all to see ....LOL

Good beginning looking forward to next chapter. Thanks for sharing.

Great beginning. I think Cam can have a lot more fun with Lisa. Hopefully his powers work on guys as well. I can see him controlling Lisa's boyfriend who could become a willing accomplice to him using Lisa and helping Cam to acquire new playthings.

Can’t wait to read more

Fun story, well written (must be because he’s an author... ;-) ) there’s a whole range of sexual activity out there he can explore, even in public. It doesn’t all have to be madly fucking every girl he fancies. Let your imagination run wide and explore - your readers will happily follow! Thanks

An excellent start.

One technical criticism, part one isn't linked to part 2, I don't see the usual READ MORE OF THIS SERIES block, so if there's some behind the scenes things you need to do in order to connect them maybe ask another author how that's done?

Chapter 2 does have a READ MORE OF THIS SERIES block, but it only links back to chapter 1 and does not link forward to chapter 3. Chapter 3 doesn't have a READ MORE OF THIS SERIES block at all.

Seriously... He thinks he may loose the power and he doesn't leave a post message so she can be triggered later? He's kinda stupid, huh?