All Comments on 'Powers for Janitor Don Ch. 03'

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Master_DoctorMaster_Doctor6 months ago

That was a pretty nice ending for an erotica series. Everyone wins. Everyone ends up in an ethically poly household. With the potential for a sequel with the 'twins'. Very well done and a nice surprise ending. Most surprising is that it works, its reasonable. Reminded me a bit of the Spore Drive in ST:D

Omart57Omart576 months ago

Great story , K! Thanks for a Happy Ending! Loved it!!!

AardieAardie6 months ago

Looks like the human race has run it's course.

Excited69Excited696 months ago

Delightful story, one of the best I've read!

StrappingManStrappingMan6 months ago

Great little story. His ethics kicked in and luckily everything was (mostly) reversable. Now whatvwill be the story twenty years from now?

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

I like Janitor Don. He's a good man, simple minded, but when faced with ultimate power he had the strength of character to to avoid succumbing to the darkness.

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Glad to see a happy conclusion. Honestly a welcome conclusion to a nice mini-series

oldmanbill69oldmanbill696 months ago

A really delightful story!

EglefinoEglefinoabout 1 month ago

it'a nice one, the idea is simple and okay and it's working in the story.

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