All Comments on 'Primal Predator'

A nice sequel.

Hot 5* stuff. Great job.

For such a short story, the eroticism was incredibly intense. Glad I didn't read this in a public place, like - oh, maybe a doctor's waiting room, where I started reading and had to stop and go and get a glass of water. Glad I wasn't anywhere like that.

Thank you. 5*

Great story! *****

Succinct and powerful. Thank you for sharing.

Hot, hot, hot

What a hot erotic story in such a few words. I enjoyed every one.

I got so invested in this I want more

Five stars!

I love this piece and its companion 'Primal Prey' -- honest, raw, and sizzling hot, Excellent erotica.

Wowza. I held my breath as I read!!!

This is a magnificent companion piece to "Primal Prey", and beautifully shows how sexual dominance can come from a place of love.

...And to the point. 5

Really enjoyed this. So evocative. The sense of lust and love perfectly co-mingled.

Excellent lusty companion piece....

As always you never cease to amaze me Gin! A great piece to go with Primal prey. These two are my top favourite for now. Keep blessing us with stuff like these. Thank you ~ Friendly neighborhood Maniac!

This is everything I crave as a prey