All Comments on 'Princess and the Punk Ch. 05'

by hunny_bee

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StuckInMyCornerStuckInMyCornerover 18 years ago
Hot...

hot hot hot hot! I like your unique style - separating his and her perspectives.. I'm enjoying this very much. Please... do go on!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Love it!!!

The writing is wonderful. I really get pulled into the story, so hot!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
very different

provocative and sexy with just enough sex to keep it erotic as well as sweet. Good writing style, and a very different approach. I'll have to read the other chapters now.

SubParPerfectionSubParPerfectionover 18 years ago
MORE NOW!!!

See, you leave it at a cliffhanger and then I am forced to inform you how amazing the story is and how well you write, all the while thinking You really suck because I WANT TO READ MORE NOW!!! Hehehe. Great job yet again. Update soon!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
eager

I have to say that this is one of the best stories I've read in a very long time, good character development and so hot! eagerly waiting chapter 6

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Its good but

Why repeat the same stuff over. Its like reading it twice and that is boring! In the moment, write about both of them..

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