by hunny_bee
hot hot hot hot! I like your unique style - separating his and her perspectives.. I'm enjoying this very much. Please... do go on!
The writing is wonderful. I really get pulled into the story, so hot!!!
provocative and sexy with just enough sex to keep it erotic as well as sweet. Good writing style, and a very different approach. I'll have to read the other chapters now.
See, you leave it at a cliffhanger and then I am forced to inform you how amazing the story is and how well you write, all the while thinking You really suck because I WANT TO READ MORE NOW!!! Hehehe. Great job yet again. Update soon!
I have to say that this is one of the best stories I've read in a very long time, good character development and so hot! eagerly waiting chapter 6
Why repeat the same stuff over. Its like reading it twice and that is boring! In the moment, write about both of them..