by hunny_bee
Why repeat the same stuff over. Its like reading it twice and that is boring! In the moment, write about both of them..
I have to say that this is one of the best stories I've read in a very long time, good character development and so hot! eagerly waiting chapter 6
See, you leave it at a cliffhanger and then I am forced to inform you how amazing the story is and how well you write, all the while thinking You really suck because I WANT TO READ MORE NOW!!! Hehehe. Great job yet again. Update soon!
provocative and sexy with just enough sex to keep it erotic as well as sweet. Good writing style, and a very different approach. I'll have to read the other chapters now.
The writing is wonderful. I really get pulled into the story, so hot!!!
hot hot hot hot! I like your unique style - separating his and her perspectives.. I'm enjoying this very much. Please... do go on!