by Spector_Dugan
Loving the series! The pee stuff wasn’t my favorite, but looking forward to seeing where this goes next.
Too far off the rails fetish-wise for me to keep hanging, looking forward to your next writing project, though.
Too short. This one felt rushed. I liked the details but it seems like a circling story now unsure where to land.
A'ight.. some more feedback because I am still really enjoying this story.
Didn't care much for the urine, seemed unnecessary. Her peeing a little was fine, kinda funny but it got a little too graphic with the smell.
Nevertheless that was a minor thing and the rest of the story worked. I like that she is not into receiving oral and is adamant about it. Known girls like that, especially the religious ones.
The blind date from the previous part was never addressed. Or her parents reaction, so them being boyfriend and girlfriend was odd to read.
Krissy's descriptions are on point though. She continues to be very well written. Can't wait to see more.
pretty obvious that she is actually the one in control of the situation. He is the husband she wants and he thinks she could never go for him