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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
*****

Nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice, but...

The build-up was great. The tension was palpable. But the sex was 'wham, bam...'

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
nice

I enjoyed the read very much.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
"Pritti" Good

Hell, I enjoyed this, perhaps somewhat shorter than I would of liked, now needs a part 3, like a whole week-end type scenario.

C_frommnC_frommnover 13 years ago
Pritti

I liked the Story cant wait to see where they go from here.

I think it could be longer and a L:il Romance would'nt hurt either.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

More Pritti, please!

Comentarista82Comentarista82over 8 years ago
Loved...

...the idea of it, especially her being the short, petite sexpot she is. Intriguing idea of having such a hot secretary and still managing to keep it looking professional.

I'll enjoy reading more. :)

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I've been writing short stories and full length novels for several years. As a professional ISO auditor and consultant I create technical documents such as standard operating procedures and health and safety best practice sheets. It is in my spare time that I write fiction, ...

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