All Comments on 'Private Lessons Ch. 08'

by SmuttySamoanMD

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WeezyfWeezyfalmost 3 years ago

Sigh after Lacy getting cucked both ways last chapter i hoped this fhapter would redeem their relationship and be a happy one for Lady. Instead what we got is Lacy leaving the room “unsatisfied” which if Lacy did to Shani she would get punished for. Ofcourse she would be unsatisfied, Ameli barely paid her attention instead she was waiting for Shani all day, saving all her strength for Shani. Broke my heart for Lacy lol.

Then Lacy x Shani.. i thought it would be a special moment instead all we got is.. “Professor Mubarak filled her completely, hitting everything at once. Lacey did not stretch her out, nor hit as deep.” My fears from last chapter came true..Shani will never be satisfied with Lacy.. she keeps comparing. After this sentence i tried to read on but what we got next hit me even harder, she started to fully compare one on one all the differences on how she is so small compared to the tall teacher.. how she lacks skill and experience. These things are peoples fucking nightmares, i do wonder if the author is a women to be writing such things? I dont ever think a a guy would appreciate being compared to anyone else.. i dont see Lacy comparing Shani with the headmistress during the whole fuck.. i stopped reading at that point, couldnt take all the negatives anymore

WeezyfWeezyfalmost 3 years ago

Oh another sentence that ruins the sex/smut.

“When Professor Mubarak fucked her hard, the world shook. Shani's body, the mattress and, that second time, even Lacey moved with the force of her powerful hips. Lacey on the other hand did not manage to shake the bed much, but she shook Shani enough to get a nice rhythm of her breast bouncing.”

WeezyfWeezyfalmost 3 years ago

I pushed on.. the one thing im happy about is after the they talked in the classroom the professor left them to each other instead of getting between them and unleashing her “uncontrollable lust” on Shani again and ruining the moment. The way she handled herself at the quad outside almost made her look like a crazy serial rapist, she just couldnt get her hands off Shani with her monster bulge..ugh

WeezyfWeezyfalmost 3 years ago

Well the ending was nice. Shani stood up for herself and told them both they were mistreating her which was nice, they both apologized and redeemed themselves. The prof apologized for neglecting Lacy and also redeemed herself for her behaviour which was nice as well. Lacy shouldve told the prof she was unsatisfied and not let it blow up like that but i get it, the tension needed a breaking point. I hope from now if they feel something is wrong or not right they talk to each other instead of only in their heads. I did miss Lscy taking charge of her whore in the end but i guess the next chapters may provide that. As for anal, i hope Lacy goes first on Shani to stretch her out as she is smaller. Btw nobody licks Lacys pussy? She did it for shani and prof yet nobody for her, hopefully soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

I´m loving the story so far and can´t wait to see how it ends! I think everything works: the characters are very well thought and are easy to empathize with, making the whole story a roller coaster of emotions. One does care about the protagonists and makes the story all that much better than most. And the smut is very well narrated too, of course

FenritchFenritchalmost 3 years ago

Another great chapter! Loved how long it was, keep up the great work

lvlninetylvlninetyalmost 3 years ago

Wow I really loved this chapter even through I was so mad at the 1st half of the pages because of the abandonment, belittling and depression 'Lacey'❤️ was experiencing I'm glad she was able to push through it proving why she's my favorite character😅🤣

(This chapter was roller-coaster but liked the 2nd half and the ending)

I'm still very confused on why a Professor👩‍🎓 like Amirah didn't come to a conclusion that Jealousy leads to extremely bad consequences🎭 like severe mental illness, loss of confidence, depression and in some cases Murder or Suicide💀

Shani has replaced Amirah as my 2nd favorite character because of her bravery and loyalty I hope Amirah never pulls a plan like that again it was way too dangerous didn't think (but we all do stupid things and never think when we're in Love🥰) I still love her character a lot though because this story is amazing my favorite on the site by far a 9/10🔥

(Also read that you're planning on having 3 more chapters but will be shorter, I hoping🥺 and praying🙏 it's a great ending for all three characters and Lacey stays with her Girlfriends😉)

Thanks for the hardwork SmuttySamoanMD🌹and bless the editor for his/her hardwork as well. Have a blessed day absolutely love you brother✌️

SNEZ_WritingSNEZ_Writingalmost 3 years ago

This is a great piece and all of the time and care you put into it is glaringly apparent.

Simply teriffic!

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Writing stories where the whims of my interest carry me. I've not been active for a while but I have not been idle! Have a banger of a story coming out soon and obviously some more private lesson shorts. Will probably try to work on more short form stories after this one for a...

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