by Mastered_again
I started laughing at 'associate's degree in computer science' and couldn't continue after that. Too ridiculous.
Best story I have read here in quite some time! Thank you! I used your avatar pic in my mind to build the story around. You are a wonderful, sexy, naughty woman. Loved how you became his bitch at the end!! Where might this story go from here.!
5 stars
I thought it was a good story. Could have used some butt stuff. You don't need a four degree to understand computers. People should learn their computer science on the street.
I Love the writing . Phrases like "My skirt joined my blouse on the patio" really paint a picture when reading. Interested to see where George takes this.
Wow, what an incredibly sheltered sex life she’s had….or lack of sex life? Unless she was a child prodigy she’s what only about 21-22 years old?
I got the impression that this guy is the “safeword blackmail” type of guy, I mean you pretty much said so. That whole you can say stop but then everything is over, that’s just a pile of crap. I want to be wrong but I don’t think I am.
A safe word is meant to pause or stop play (esp if you’re using the traffic light system) it’s not meant to end everything between a couple for that night and definitely not to end a relationship. Odds are if someone has called a safeword then they need to talk about the scene.
Fingers crossed that this doesn’t devolve into a kink checklist. I’ve definitely enjoyed what you’ve written so far.
Thanks for sharing Tess (uk)
Tests - all I can say is read on and I hope you're not disappointed
Wow that was really good, I have to say even before the sexy stuff the dialogue and characters were excellent and entertaining to read :) cant wait to read more!
I enjoyed your patience I the build up and how you painted the picture. Curious to see how you develop the character and your style. Great job. (you even had a yada yada yada in there so as a Seinfeld fan, I hav etc appreciate.). Some small continuity early but fantastic overall. I hope you enjoy writing them as well.
Well I tried to leave a comment but didnt seem to save so here goes again and hope it is not a duplicate.
Well written, got me immersed in the story with a good build up and painting a realistic picture. I look forward to reading your additional follow up ups and seeing your growth as a writer. Hope you enjoyed writing as much as I did reading.
I enjoyed the first part. It was detailed enough to keep me interested with enough sexual content. I look forward to the next 9. Also, going to look at lil Elvis stories when done.
It was well written. Kept my interests with enough sexual tension in the story. I look forward to reading the others in the series.
Great set up to what looks like a promising series. Hard core Dom isn't usually my "thing" but so far this , well... works for me.
Looking forward to more.
A nice start! I don't often read series, but I'm trying to branch out and this looks like a strong beginning. The characters are interesting enough that I want to find out what happens to them, rather than just read about what they do.
Love the authenticity of the dynamic, money affords luxuries that allow things to play out. Written with nuance and a flair not common.