All Comments on 'Proclivities - Pt. 01'

I started laughing at 'associate's degree in computer science' and couldn't continue after that. Too ridiculous.

Best story I have read here in quite some time! Thank you! I used your avatar pic in my mind to build the story around. You are a wonderful, sexy, naughty woman. Loved how you became his bitch at the end!! Where might this story go from here.!

5 stars

I thought it was a good story. Could have used some butt stuff. You don't need a four degree to understand computers. People should learn their computer science on the street.

Great story, I sure hope it's a true one! Going to read pt. 2 now!

looks like it will be a great series

I Love the writing . Phrases like "My skirt joined my blouse on the patio" really paint a picture when reading. Interested to see where George takes this.

Wow, what an incredibly sheltered sex life she’s had….or lack of sex life? Unless she was a child prodigy she’s what only about 21-22 years old?

I got the impression that this guy is the “safeword blackmail” type of guy, I mean you pretty much said so. That whole you can say stop but then everything is over, that’s just a pile of crap. I want to be wrong but I don’t think I am.

A safe word is meant to pause or stop play (esp if you’re using the traffic light system) it’s not meant to end everything between a couple for that night and definitely not to end a relationship. Odds are if someone has called a safeword then they need to talk about the scene.

Fingers crossed that this doesn’t devolve into a kink checklist. I’ve definitely enjoyed what you’ve written so far.

Thanks for sharing Tess (uk)

Tests - all I can say is read on and I hope you're not disappointed

Wow that was really good, I have to say even before the sexy stuff the dialogue and characters were excellent and entertaining to read :) cant wait to read more!

Beautifull and sublime. Love the images.

I enjoyed your patience I the build up and how you painted the picture. Curious to see how you develop the character and your style. Great job. (you even had a yada yada yada in there so as a Seinfeld fan, I hav etc appreciate.). Some small continuity early but fantastic overall. I hope you enjoy writing them as well.

Well I tried to leave a comment but didnt seem to save so here goes again and hope it is not a duplicate.

Well written, got me immersed in the story with a good build up and painting a realistic picture. I look forward to reading your additional follow up ups and seeing your growth as a writer. Hope you enjoyed writing as much as I did reading.

I enjoyed the first part. It was detailed enough to keep me interested with enough sexual content. I look forward to the next 9. Also, going to look at lil Elvis stories when done.

It was well written. Kept my interests with enough sexual tension in the story. I look forward to reading the others in the series.

Great set up to what looks like a promising series. Hard core Dom isn't usually my "thing" but so far this , well... works for me.

Looking forward to more.

Thanks @Djmac1031. Read on; things are not always as they seem.

A nice start! I don't often read series, but I'm trying to branch out and this looks like a strong beginning. The characters are interesting enough that I want to find out what happens to them, rather than just read about what they do.

You have my pussy so wet right now…