All Comments on 'Proclivities - Pt. 09: Psychoanalysis'

You can't stop it here. This chapter definitely stepped things up another gear.

You could take this story through a zillion more chapters, parents, kids, the world is your oyster.

Good story, enjoyed it so far.

You’ve already set up the sailing for the next day and parents on the day after that, but I’d like to see the bondage stuff uploaded as well as seeing where things go with that other couple from the site.

You’ve made it clear each character intends to be monogamous, but maybe they can explore having an audience or her fetish of being cummed on.

Sailing should be next. The return of the bikini is something I'd like to see

How could I Not !

A story of love and explore!

Of deviance exposing central themes.

Of mutual search and tender explore and...

Find each other there.

How Rare!!!!!!!!!!

Enjoy! And as you can. Share !!!

Thanks

You take an awful long time to move the story along, we didn't even get to the sailing or the sunday barby with her parents. The story is getting mundane and I skipped through a lot of it this chapter. 4 pages this chapter and no forward movement, you should get a boogie on before you lose interest in finishing it. Tell us a story and stop dawdling