by RandolphPorter
Excellent story, well written with lots of original thoughts. The idea of being naked except for briefs around my ankles is very arousing to this submissive cocksucker.
Thank you for your all your efforts, and for your skill, intellect, creativity, and patience in sharing this intelligent and well-crafted fantasy story on Lit.
Detailed but not dogmatic, expressing-capturing the physical - emotional - psychological of both male and female characters, maintaining the level of reality, and having a sexual tension running throghout. Gifted storytelling.
I really enjoyed reading this story. The ending was a bit soft, seeming like you just stopped writing for now. Nothing was wrapped up.
Thank you for writing and posting here.
What a great story! I loved how much detail and thought was put into it. It was a great story line, good characters, and believable! I would get on my knees and beg for a continuation of this.
fantastic story, I am a professor, and that would be a wonderful fantasy, do you have any other chapter/continuation of that story. (even for all the other you have written, they are all amazing