All Comments on 'Project Venus Ch. 01'

This was awesome!

Let me know how you folks like it, and if there’s anything you’d like to see in future chapters.

really nice story, more please!

Your story was great. Can’t wait for the second chapter! Maybe you can have Lola wear a diaper and you can describe more girls and their cocks and have Jenny be with them. Either Jenny or Lola can get pregnant?

Amasing story. I would love a place like this.

I can suspend my disbelief for a lot of things, but portable storage SMALLER than a micro SD? No utopian society would condone such torture!

Amazing, personally I'd love to see more ballbusting activity. The "Squeeze them... slap them... hurt them." was excellent, more of this!

I know what I will be dreaming about tonight. Please continue

Sorry I’ve taken so long. I’ve started a few drafts I wasn’t satisfied with, the first involved Jenny and her friends trying a Seinfeld “master of my domain” style bet. I might return to that idea, but I just wanted to assure you guys that I’m working on it.

Nice. I like the slow start. It built anticipation.

Kinda wanna rewrite where Lola is her older sister. Maybe I'll just headcanon it.