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ender2k2kender2k2kover 2 years ago

That was unexpected. I look forward to reading the next chapter. Thanks

GHreaderGHreaderover 2 years ago
Ooooh Kayy

I did not see that one coming.

I think I have Whiplash.

I am looking forward to where you take this story. I may have to sit back and let you publish a few chapters before returning. It will take several 3 page Literotica chapters to explain this redirection. I look forward to continuing this story. All of your stories are well worth reading and I know this will make sense soon.

CUCK972CUCK972over 2 years ago

I'm very interested to see where it goes from here, I like it

BrokenUnicornBrokenUnicornover 2 years ago

This chapter just about broke my heart. I can't imagine where it goes from here. But I look forward to finding out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Well for goodness sake. The cavalry slept in this morning , but never fear our heroine turned fraud was rescued

not by billy hiccup with his 150 shot six guns, but by Peter and the little hotel maid. Just wonderful. LP

Great story by the way.

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The first fiction I ever wrote (outside of grade school assignments anyway) was a short piece of erotica that I first shared here at Lit. Somehow an Editor’s Choice award was bestowed upon it, but at my request that early and clumsy effort was eventually removed and I focused ...

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