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She's married, having sex with Chris who isn't her husband, is having sex with some doctor, and is whoring herself out because she basically enjoys being a slut. But, oh Michael, don't tell Chris! Like she will feel bad about herself for being the whore she is if her illegitimate lover found out about her promiscuity? Really?

Given what we know about STD's and with the advent of COVID this sounds like a death march to hell. Even for a fictional story.

Great part can't wait for the next one!

I look forward to the next part. I hope there is more of her taking 2 guys.

Hot story . Why he doesn’t care is a question for me . When social media started so did independent hookers without pimps online . Many married women for their own extra money were doing it . The younger guys were using if I remember my space at the time . They would go to lunch to get laid for a few bucks . I know they scored some others guys moms from the area . One I knew and about ten of them fucked her some many times. One kid loved that she was a friends mom and was going a few times a week when she could . He had audio tapes letting everyone listen, so juvenile. You hear him saying how he loves fucking his friends mom as she’s grunting and him saying where my cock a few times as she squealed out oh my god your big cock is up my married mommy ass . It started to get out as so many were hearing about her the rumors got back to her three kids and questions started but supposedly she laughed it off saying horney young guys with fantasy is all it is . She was more careful but didn’t stop . Apparently she told the one who fucked her the most that she really needs to fuck she can’t explain. She loves her hubby and family but he’s slowed down and only wants to do it maybe twice a week. Liked I said about ten of them were fucking like crazy picking regular women off the site and fucking them . They would laugh because the married ones were not much money, they didn’t know how to charge so they were cheap. One time and once only two of them showed up together. They talked her into both together. They fucked her hard . Left her and she said that was an experience and never show up here again together, I’m not a pig and it may have felt good at times but she didn’t like the feeling of being used like that. I’d see the family out to dinner together and think of how bad I felt for them . She loved them and couldn’t help herself? She needed a doc not a abundance of cock and apparently she knew how people looked her and her family but can’t help herself

I really like this story, told from the POV of Michael, Lucy’s husband. This couple seem to have worked out a relationship that works for them so Lucy can fuck who she wants as long as Michael approves. She has started whoring herself out to Ken and Andrew, and soon, no doubt, other doctors and friends of Ken. Michael suggested that Lucy make time for Chris, a lover of hers. Lucy responded, “sure Michael, I thought an entire weekend of sex would be fun, but I can take care of Chris after I'm done with my paying customers! Will you help me pick out a jersey?" This exchange characterizes their comfortable handling of her whoring and fucking and is, for the most part, without tension or angst. Michael has no problem with Lucy fucking for money but insists on certain ground rules, mostly for Lucy’s protection, no matter that Ken is a paying customer and has his own desires. I like how Michael handles this; he enjoys his wife fucking other men, even if he cannot be there, which he prefers, but then insists on hourly reports. Michael is not a cuck, Lucy is a hotwife and a whore for a select few men, and the couple seem to operate as a partnership; neither one is always dominant, although Michael does set the general safety rules for his slut wife. I may have missed it, but has Lucy arranged for regular doctor checks (with someone other than Ken and her other doctor Johns) for sTDs, HIV? I assume Lucy is on the pill. When stories get as “real” as this one, I start to expect to read about the “real” consequences of Lucy’s sexual activity and how it is being addressed. All in all, this is a terrific story. Lucy is a slut and now an independent whore who loves cock, but mostly follows Michael’s rules. Michael enjoys watching Lucy fuck other men, and if that is not possible (Michael can’t have everything all the time) then he requires regular texts or videos and he absolutely insists that he knows where Lucy is when she is on a date. All very mature. These are two adults who love each other but know what they want and have figured out a way to get it so both are satisfied. I love how the author has developed this story and created two very believable characters.

Not sure why this never showed up, so trying again.

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Some free advice since you're fairly new...

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First, don't wait until part 9 to start putting part numbers in the title. If you're writing a multi-part story, be up front about it.

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Don't make your potential readers guess the proper order of a multi-part story. Adding part/chapter numbers to each submission is a bare minimum. Creating a series so that they are presented in order and linked for easy reading is a simple step that should be taken. Having a link at the bottom of the last page to jump to the next part is a nice convenience.