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by Aileena_Sylvan

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Good... but with an abrupt ending

A good read - but it switches person halfway through (from describing the man in the 3rd person to the 2nd person, "he" to "you") which is a bit off-putting. Also ends rather abruptly.

But a good read nonetheless.

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