All Comments on 'Punishing My Wife'

The gratuitous focus on characters' ethnicity is lowkey "yikes", bordering on fetishization. Straight woman engaging in lesbian sex without any reluctance AND performing like a pro is laughable. The male PoV will rub a lot of people the wrong way, as most of us who come here are lesbians or men who truly appreciate lesbian love instead of objectifying it. I could go on, but I hope my constructive criticisms can help you improve as a writer.

Kind regards,

KG

Ridiculous nonsense