All Comments on 'Puppy Love Ch. 02'

Ouch! Brings back memories of being in Jack’s position!

What the hell???!!! Poor Jack. OMGee. You've got to post the next chapter soon because I wanna know how he took it. Must be heartbroken. I'm hooked

Definitely did not see that rejection coming! What do you have up your sleeve, PockettRockett???

Omg, I did not see that coming AT ALL!!!! I totally read Luke the wrong way as well. My heart is aching so much for Jack right now. I'm even feeling bad for Theo and Olive, as this may impact their getting together again. After all Jack when through, now to have this happen, it'll definitely worsen his already low self-esteem. I can't imagine how he'll be able to face Luke at work. Chapter #2 was five more *s for this great and now intense story.

Ouch!! But to be fair Luke didn’t say anything when Reve suggested that he use his money to take Jack out on a date and exclaimed that “chivalry is not dead “ when Jack opened his car door. I hope Luke realizes and apologizes the next time they talk. I wonder if after the shock Luke liked the kiss and is flattered amongst other things. Ex_Luke1

noooooo. noooooo! they opened up to each other and everything too omg. I hope things go better for Jack next chapter, poor bastard.

That was so great! I wasn't at Literotica for some time but I found out you have a new story and I'm just diggin'it! I love the rejection twist 🥰