All Comments on 'Purple Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
why did you have to go the brother/sister incest route?

I for one would like the stories to be a bit longer. I mean, can't he go after all the hot girls in school, college and maybe travel the world with his powers. I look forward to other stories/chapters but if they include incest I'm out.

billyjim55billyjim55about 8 years ago
LOVE THE SUCCUBI IDEA

Incest didnt bother me, but it also was the best way to show his friend the truth with ultimate payback. even mother/son would be cool.but never give more than 4 stars for a mere 1 pg story/chapter. more depth, descriptions body parts, hair color. Size her body, the sex itself, why did a nerd know how to eat pussy? draw the reader into the story and the characters with at least 2pgs per chpt. just my thoughts,forgive grammer n typing. disabled and 1 vshaking finer make hrd to do thrw pain also. reading only mind n incest stories daily to get threw my day. i love a good story / ty/ bill

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