All Comments on 'Pusher Ch. 04'

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Did you fail primary school?

4 chapters of blowjobs. You a 12 yr old?

.... you need to work on your protagonists character. He's not just 'dumb-as-a-rock / ruled-by-his-cock'; he's also got some severe short term memory problems. [[Example: He sets up the trigger word 'Please' and not half a sentence later, forgets to USE IT!]] How dumb can one guy get? >>>> The only thing that keeps this tale from being pure sophomoric trash, is your vocabulary range, grammar usage and the fact that your boy seems to still have a twinge of conscience every once in a while. Of course, that never happens until after he unloads his ball sacks. >>>> Before you retort; "It's a fantasy"! Yes, I do know that fact, but for heavens sake, at least give your protagonist enough blood supply to operate both brains in tandem. Thanks for the effort.

Keep it up, I like that the chapters are coming fast and furious. It's great!

Again, this should be categorized Mind Control instead of Incest.

this series was so hot, I really loved it

I hope you do more