All Comments on 'Pussyberry Smoothie'

by Omenainen

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AwkwardMDAwkwardMDabout 2 years ago

Incredibly delicious

rayironyrayironyabout 2 years ago
Tasty, sensual

and culinarily approved.

5 star dining story indeed

SimonDoomSimonDoomabout 2 years ago

Nicely told. I think you did an unusually good job of telling a satisfyingly complete story within the severe word limits. That's such a challenge. Nice ending.

MrPixelMrPixelabout 2 years ago

Fun. And funny. Thanks!

Aurora_DickensonAurora_Dickensonabout 2 years ago

Great ending to a lovely, well-told tale; your characters are always so sympathetically described.

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I write stories I like to read and publish them here in hope someone else might enjoy them too. Comments are much appreciated. English is not my first language, so go easy on my mistakes. I’m also writing under a second penname with the wonderful AwkwardMD. Our collaborat...