All Comments on 'Quality Inspector'

I unfortunately can relate to this story.... I fee

So lonely sometimes....

Narrator is solid, Katie is getting there, but there is no indication at all as to why the wife is so angry and withholding, and hostile to his overtures. Need to flesh her out to make her a character in 3d.

***Thanks for the read.

The story us to be continued and is unfinished. I give the story three stars.