All Comments on 'Quarantine Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Good story but a little fast. Proofreading will help stair/stare and log/long for example. Look forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Yep keep going. Definitely spell check in grammar..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

All those details about the sister but not a mention about her being bipolar and having a maniac episode half way through the story.

muskyboymuskyboyabout 1 year ago

SO hot, keep going! Thanks for these stories, good length for me.

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Worked the flight deck of three aircraft carriers. 27 years driving semi trucks and now retired. Have always enjoyed writing and hope to contribute here.

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