Queen of Spades Pt. 01

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"I have plenty of money and I'd like to pay you back for purchasing us."

"No, I won't accept your money. You don't owe us anything. In fact, we can, for the most part, forget about this day. I would like to continue where we left off the other night. You said you'd have dinner with me. Would you still like to do that?" Nina asks.

My mother blushes with a smile. "I would like that very much."

"Good, tomorrow we'll have that dinner. Why don't you and your kids get some rest? We'll talk about whatever arrangements you need in the morning. I'll show you to your rooms," Nina says as she holds out her hand to my mother. My mom accepts.

"I'm going to take these two back to my place," Kamilla says.

"Kamilla, don't you think they deserve some peace and rest after all they've gone through?" Nina asks.

"I won't force them to do anything they don't want to do," Kamilla says.

"It's fine. I would like to go with Kamilla," Amber says, catching me off guard. "Come on, Taylor. We owe it to her. Besides, we'll be staying with her from now on. We might as well settle in."

I look over at my mother, and she looks concerned. I already know what Kamilla wants. She wants to fuck us. I'm a little confused about how I feel about it. I'm both terrified by her and completely aroused. "It's okay, mom. We'll be fine."

She walks up and hugs me. "Everything is going to be okay."

I nod as I wrap my arms around her. She gives me a kiss on my forehead and then hugs Amber. "Look after my son, will you?"

"Of course. Don't worry, we can trust Kamilla."

She nods and wipes away a tear. I look over at Rosa. "It was nice to meet you."

She gives a sympathetic smile. "You too."

I look over at Nina. "Thank you so much for saving my mom and my girlfriend."

"Of course."

I turn to Kamilla and nod.

"Nina, I'd like to talk to you about putting on a Charity Ball," Rosa says as we follow Kamilla out.

Her security team is waiting for her as they hold the door open for us. Kamilla sits in between us and puts her hand on our thighs. "On our way here, Amber and I discussed our situation."

I look up at Kamilla and then at Amber. She's practically clinging to Kamilla with her arm wrapped around her as if she's her girlfriend.

"Okay..."

"Taylor, I want to be in an exclusive relationship with Kamilla. Just the three of us."

"Like, how?" I ask. I wasn't quite sure how this was going to work out. Obviously, I knew Kamilla wanted me, but I didn't know exactly how.

"Well, I'm going to be Kamilla's submissive girlfriend and you're going to be our sissy pet slave. Does that sound about right, baby?" Amber asks Kamilla.

"It sounds good to me. How do you like the sound of that?" Kamilla asks me.

"Do I have a choice?"

"Of course. As I said, I'm not going to rape you, but you made a deal to be my little sissy slave. Are you a man of your word? Or should I say, girl?"

I take in a deep breath and let it out, feeling a little emasculated. I don't know what to say to her. Should I just submit? She's right, I made a deal. I just can't help but worry about what my friends back home would think of me. I could never face them if they found out. Not that I'll ever be able to go home again. But, this has been a fantasy of mine for a long time.

"Come on, Taylor. I know you want this. You've watched so much porn about being dominated by a girl with a dick and turned into a sissy. Now is your chance, don't back out now. You can live out your fantasy. And you'll have two beautiful women to sleep with. How can you pass this up?"

"Fine. You honored your part of the deal and I'll honor mine. Can we just take it slow?" I ask.

"Of course, my little pet. I'm glad you're a sissy of your word," she says with a smirk. Amber snickers at her words.

We arrive at Kamilla's and we're led inside. "So, are we going to give Taylor a makeover? I've wanted to do this for a long time!"

"Of course, darling. Anything for my sweetheart," Kamilla says as she wraps her arm around Amber and pulls her close, giving her a peck on the cheek. Amber practically glows. I can't help but feel jealousy. Is this how life is going to be now?

Chapter 11: Kamilla Zorita

Before we can dress the sissy up, I get a phone call. It's my contact on the streets. I have to answer it. I tell Amber to take Taylor upstairs to my master bathroom and start shaving his body. She gladly agrees and takes the reluctant sissy up.

"This is Kamilla," I say.

"Kamilla, you were right. I've got the evidence you wanted," my contact, Camilo Andrade, says.

I bite my lip. I knew it! "Okay, I'll be right there."

Fuck! This is the worst possible time. I finally have exactly what I want, a sexy little sissy and very deviant girlfriend, and now I can't even take the time to enjoy them. Fuck me. I walk upstairs to find a scene that makes my dick hard. Amber's shaving Taylor's plumb ass as he blushes beat red. Fuck, it makes me want to fuck his ass right here and now. I pull myself out of the gutter. "I have to go check up on something. You two should get some sleep. Tomorrow we can start up where we left off, dressing our little sissy up and have some fun."

"Really? Aww. I was hoping to see you fuck his ass," Amber says with a pouty face. Fuck, she is so perfect.

"I know. You have no idea how hard it is for me to leave right now, but this is important." My teeth sink into my bottom lip.

"Okay, mistress, but you better make it up to me tomorrow. I want the wildest and craziest sex you've ever had."

A devilish smirk crosses my face. "I'm going to fuck both of you until you pass out from exhaustion."

"You promise?" Amber asks.

"I swear to god," I say, biting my lip.

"Okay. I'll hold you to it and I'll make sure this sissy is ready for your beautiful cock," she says, smacking Taylor's ass. His face is even redder if that's possible. Fuck, I'm the luckiest woman alive right now. Well, I will be.

I reluctantly pull myself away from such a sexy sight and head out. I arrive at the usual location to meet up with my contact, Camilo, my personal private investigator. He's a rather short, balding man who's got a bit of a gut with a mustache. "I've tailed the man just like you ask. He's definitely up to something. I bet my money on it he's working with the CNI. I've got photos of him meeting up with Carlos and David Pousa. The same men who've been harassing you and your associates."

"Great work. I knew that bastard American was up to no good. You can't trust Americans," I say, gritting my teeth. And yet, I can't help but smirk. I told Raquel she couldn't trust him. Why does she never listen to me?

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Really hoping you continue this story

laladoodielaladoodieabout 1 year ago

Omg this was so hot. Your stories have to continue.

EmirusEmirusover 1 year ago

FINALLY got round to reading this follow up to Redone and I did enjoy reading it. You’ve introduced several new characters and written a story which parallels Redone with a different plot line. Obviously there will be a connection between the two as evidenced by the ending of this chapter.

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Please don’t think I’m trying to teach my granny how to suck eggs because you’ve written a lot of very good stories and if not for that fact and that I’ve enjoyed them I wouldn’t be making the following comments.

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I’ve read stories by mainstream authors who have ruined very good stories by introducing too many subplots (I don’t think that’s going to be the case here) and introducing so many characters the reader ends up not knowing who is who, what they’ve done earlier in the story and how they interconnect with each other without the reader looking back.

*****

You’ve done an excellent job with storylines and the characters you’ve introduced. I’ve had no difficulty in following everything which is one of the reasons I’ve enjoyed both stories. Queen of Clubs Redone should definitely be read before Queen of Spades otherwise it’s like reading Godfather Pt.2 before P.1.

*****

A few months ago I read a first rate story of 9 chapters with a very strong plot. I think highly of it even though there were two big mistakes which caused the scoring to drop.

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There was an Amber/Taylor loving couple in a similar scenario that was going very well. The boy was happy with the girl in control and so was the readership. Until she suddenly changed into a heartless, uncaring bitch. The chapter score went down.

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The next chapter introduced an excellent female character. Dominant in the best possible way and with an ingenious plot twist. The score shot up to its highest level of all the chapters. Then she became a psycho and the scoring again went down

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A couple of people have suggested the full on sissy route for Taylor with implants, chastity cage etc. I think that would be a mistake. He’s happy crossdressing. He’s happy sucking dick and he will be happy being fucked by Kamilla. He’ll be happy being fucked by Amber’s strapon. He’ll be happy licking Kamilla’s cum from Amber. He loves Amber and will do anything for her. There’s no need to turn her into a heartless bitch with no feelings for him. Better to have a sissy who will do things willingly rather than beat them with a big stick. Put him in a dress for a bit if fun, which he will enjoy, but not force him down a route that’s unpalateable for him and the reader. It would be a step too far away from where this story has been and is going.

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You’ve done an exemplary job of showing the reader Kamilla’s character perfectly. She has trust issues, she dangerous, she’ll take action without thinking through the consequences, even the potential risks to herself, and she doesn’t have a problem killing people she believes are against her and/or the cartel. That’s fine in the cartel story. But don’t turn her into a psycho as far as Taylor, and possibly Amber, may be concerned. Nina and Maliana are going to be loving lovers. His mother would enjoy and accept full on sissification of Taylor? I don’t think so. She knows he’s a sissy. She loves her son and wants him to be happy in the same way as she’s happy with Nina.

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A long comment and you may or may not want to take my comments into consideration and, of course, it’s your story but I think it would be remiss of me if I didn’t make the comment.

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5 stars, by the way. 👍 ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

MCJOHN11708MCJOHN11708over 1 year ago

Poor Taylor, honestly. Having a partner cheat on you not once, not twice, but three+ times? Damn. Amber is so damn cruel to Taylor. Openly insinuating that she'd rather be with Kamila over him straight to his face, with zero care. Jesus, and the whole ''He lied to me! What an asshole!'' subplot really irked me tbh. Maybe Taylor was just not ready to take that leap yet...? How does that justify anything she's done thus far? Honestly, he should've dumped her right after the coke incident. The sex scenes were really hot tho. Love your work and keep on truckin' so to speak! Hoping Amber gets to redeem herself in future chapters, fingers crossed!

OzeminotaurOzeminotaurover 1 year ago

Really love this keep it going and I can’t wait to see Taylor turned into a full sissy with tits the hole works keep both story’s going

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