All Comments on 'Rabbit in the Hail Storm'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You had me at "a Picasso rendition of strawberries and cream."

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Freaking awesome.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Wow! Very “stimulating” I must say.

nfsunbumnfsunbumover 1 year ago

"spray a helpless bunny with their pelvic shotguns." Classic. "charged spunk rocket." Another fun one. Nice way to handle your milky white ass so the myriad spunk loads are easier to see. Good story, nice premise, easy to read and follow, and most importantly, as I had promised, helped me to unload my own spunk as I read through. Thank you, Legs.

Want23exploreWant23explore8 months ago

Love a happy ending and our protagonist getting rewarded

KentLondonKentLondon6 months ago

Love your writing style and the ability to create such an outlandish fantasy and translate it into such an entertaining story.

I will definitely read the rest of your stories!

AchtungNightAchtungNight6 months ago

Very good story. Dani is welcome in my ficverse any time. :)

DarToonDarToon4 months ago

Again, there's a smile on my face as I step off the magic carpet of your stories.

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Hi I’m Dani, let me start by saying I’m weird an nosy. My stories so far focus on some strange fantasies about me as a bottomless house cleaner. I am working on two new series as well. One doesn’t have a title yet but will be about a post apocalyptic cleaning squad, still fe...