by iwiwt
@musky I’m not super sure why you read and comment on my stuff; you don’t seem to particularly enjoy it? Why not spend time on authors you do enjoy?
I liked the way you convey both the excitement and mild humiliation of being submissive. Closer to reality than 99% of the stories here.
A smart, sexy woman who plays erotic games to satisfy both of them is as hot as it gets! Don't listen to the negative comments made by the "real men" who could not do this because they would lose their macho man card. There is a lot of fun to be had here & you are just getting started.
Thanks for the kind words Anon, I appreciate them :)
I’ve been flopping with my stuff across the board for a bit so I’m thinking of taking a new direction for a while, but I still value your feedback so much; thanks!
Good premise.
But seriously truncated.
Needed much more in the way of preliminaries before cock entered pussy.
She didn't have him eat her pussy? Not at all?
She didn't touch his cock and balls to 'verify' that he hadn't played with himself/jerked off?
Does it feel good?
Can you imagine how good it'll feel when you get to cum -- after making me cum?
Three stars.