All Comments on 'Rachel Lynn Ch. 02'

This was a fun read up to and including the very last line! Nice that you tied up all of the loose ends at the end. It is so very nice to be reading your stories again. We (the collective we, not the royal we), your fan club, have been missing your stories. Welcome back, Sylvia! ~~ JB

Another excellent tale from you, Sylvia. I'm mildly disappointed that it was only the two chapters, but they were good. Nice twist at the end, who'd have guessed you'd be knocked up by a mere boy!

5* again.

I read this to catch up to your later writing.

Your style is much pithier (currently).

Almost Heminway-esque.

My guess is it was harder to write a traditional sex story with a powerful female as the protagonist.

The money deprives the character of vulnerability.