All Comments on 'Raging Love Ch. 05'

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lonelyheartVAlonelyheartVAabout 4 years ago
These people need to get a life.

There is no way that I would live with people in these emotional conditions. Just sad.

mfa607mfa607about 4 years ago

So good! Thank you!

Chancem77Chancem77about 4 years ago
Great story

Can't wait till they all find out about Sean and I want so badly for Antonio to find out what Andrea and Bruce did, how they framed Praveen. So exciting. Can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
This story sucks the life out of you. Its not erotic, its just torture for the reader! It never ends on and on!

Its good to see Travis has turned the tables some! But how many more chapters of this misery can one tolerate. Revenge, Hate, all this anger, it just sucks the life out of everyone involved.

Maybe with all his power, money and influence Travis could focus on investigating the set up from Bruce and Andrea! If he could bring that out into the open quickly, and give proof to the family, all the rest of this torment would play itself out. Bruce, Andrea, and Emma would get what they deserve and have coming without destroying all of the innocent other family members. Bring it to some kind of a conclusion for all of the readers! Its like a gory horrible car crash you just can't seem to look away from!!! Just way to much darkness for me!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Can’t wait for the next chapter. Hope Travis gets his revenge and Antonio finally realises what a wasteful 6 years he spent.

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
STINKINGLY THE BEST AUTHOR πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜—πŸ˜—πŸ˜—all credit to you Van

Damn,i saw the submission when i was still at work and got me all rushing to read it hihihihi,, now here am satisfied,lets go

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
Starting with page 1,hahahahaha

Fuck...Antonio z going to go crazy trust me..Travis is killing the man he z lusting over him but he z so angry to notice...did u see how they fell on to the floor????? Hehehehe mmmmmmmm i swear one day Ant will decide to rape Travis...i wonder why he was happy when he looked into Travis' eyes when they were on the floor heeehehe their chemistry is undeniable though Ant is denying it....hehe we have the man now Bruce go fuck your self

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
Well,well,well,welll

I was for so long waiting for this..yes for some one to stand out for Emilia..gosh fuck yeah,why not???? I mean they were all hurt including her tooπŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘πŸ˜‘ but all those insults from Emma were getting on our nerves...hey what i mean is Eduardo was among our hero's today,..yes Emma had to shut,God that shit lady really cant shut up and am sure she killed Ant's father....eeehhhhh haaaa let's be ready am sure she killed him...my boy Ed thank u so much for putting that slut in her positionπŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
Granny has been taken....

I enjoyed Ant's face when all this happened,...hehe when he knew that Prav is the savior hahaha...how he cudnt do anything about their departure hahaha...he has to admit that we make him weakkkkk.....yesWE RULE THOSE FOOOLSSSSSS HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA am so evil now heheπŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£...i liked how Trav dealt with Emily at the company,God i was like plz dont insult her and yeah my prayers were had,...Travis made it. Moderate....BTW these people are foolish,,if they knew that prav was humble and wudnt be insulting them like Travis,y do they still accuse him???? FOOLISHHHHH

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
The getaway

Hahaha that hot Romano guy,huuummmmmmmm,hey italian communicated hihihihihi I swear those fools almost died.....Travis has shares in it hohohoho no way these are gonna shave us off......haha i thought Vanessa wud meet Celine in the park but it turned out to be Travis coming to the getaway hahaha to distort them alllllll hihihihihi am in love with this i swear Antonio almost died high so Gooooodddddd,keep seeing ur other self in mirrors as we drive u crazy with our.......high i love,Antonio

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
Actually Bruce's state is deserving sympathy hahahahaπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£

when will he stop humiliating himself???????πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†he wanted to grab Travis and ended up plunging himself in de pool hohohihihi yessssssssssssssssss.....how Ant INSULTED HIM INFRONT OF US HAHAHA oh Bruce dear feel it baby hahaha...how Prav laughed at him.....God how did Ethan do it,i mean turning them so fast like that hahahaha POOR BRUCE,JUST USE A DILDO COZ NOW WE HAVE THE GUYYYYYYYYYY

josranvictorjosranvictorabout 4 years ago
Cant wait Van

This is the best Easter gift......plz give me of this though the end of this chapter was the best so farrrrr hahahahaha i cant stop laughingπŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ€£πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ€£πŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜šπŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜„πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜†πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰ theme song..........this is what's came for-rihanna

Needed me-rihanna

Mirror-justine Timberlake

Monster-rihanna and eminem

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Awsum

I agree can't wait for Antonio to find out about Sean

and looking forward to Andrea and Bruce being totally crushed

by Travis/Praveen

Like most of the world New Zealand is also under isolation PLEASE hurry with

the next chapter❀

Kiwi Fan

AKA983AKA983about 4 years ago
HMM A MASTER PIECE LIKE THAT

Ah Bruce get for his money And Antonio πŸ˜‚

I trust you You Van

Till next

Love you

OnimOnimabout 4 years ago
Fantastic!!

Waiting for Travis to slap the crap out of this entire narcissistic family and move on...maybe find solace with Ethan, since he seems to be the only one associated with them that's not psychotic! Great chapter...awesome story!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Great but

Please don't end the story with Antonio and Praveen getting back together. Make Praveen/Travis find love somewhere else. After everything he's been through he shouldn't end up with them again.

SweetwaterlordSweetwaterlordabout 4 years ago
I hope

Good chapters. Thank you, was dying for some more...sigh...please finish up this story! Haha...updating is annoying and so slow hahaha but still. Great one.

I can understand why Travis seem to be weak around Antonio whenever he do stuff like that but I hope..and this should how be in reality...I hope Travis will slowly regain and redevelop callous in his heart to no longer allow himself being weak whenever Antonio being physical and sexually harassing him...I want see Travis teach him a lesson by not to touch him again or forcing kisses n etc. Really...he's going rape him just because...sure heck hope it doesn't end up like that and I want see Travis regain control around him.

I agree with some other commenters about Travis finding someone esle...not going back to him....it's totally unfair and cruel end result even if Antonio found out whole truths...still be does not deserve him at all. Travis deserved a true and proper love not controlling freak and hypocrite bastard to think fact that so call Travis cheat on him is not okay when he think for himself to cheating on Travis is okay instead and act like Travis is a property and not that should be under him by his own demands and all rights. Fact he think Travis should loving him regardless what he done to him is. I sure heck hope that Travis having a husband already somewhere and treat him like truly Prince than what Antonio treat him.

Good chapter! Hurry up gimme chapter 6 and 7 and rest of them!

naughtymattynaughtymattyabout 4 years ago

Exactly anonymous guy who said no to Trav and Antonio going back together. Antonio is just the biggest asshole in the story. While Emma, Bruce and Andrea are the hypocrites.

And when Ethan reminded Antonio that 'if' Praveen cheated, Antonio did it as well with Bruce. That makes 4 hypocrites. Great one! The fucker had it coming. And that makes 4 hypocrites. Antonio is so all over the place and he deserved it, HE DOES.

Great chapter! I'm excited for what's next.

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