All Comments on 'Ralph and Danni'

by BJB69

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DunkirkDunkirkover 3 years ago

Too bad ralph didn't get her pregnant.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
This story could have finished stronger

It's too bad she didn't ultimately marry a black man.

abob1abob1over 3 years ago

Great start, but you summarized too many of the scenes towards the end. Would have been great to read those in more detail.

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