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BeauqBeauq12 months ago

Illiterate and incoherent.

Raven7890Raven789012 months ago

The girls we’re fun and descriptive but the rest didn’t make sense and felt rushed

lostopportunitylostopportunity12 months agoAuthor

thank you for the wonderful feedback Cheri XOXO

Colonel_DingleberryColonel_Dingleberry9 months ago

Average to below average story. It had a lot of potential if you'd just taken your time but when it got to the train part it just felt rushed and lacked any real descriptive detail. Kind of a waste

Peter851Peter85113 days ago

I did enjoy this one

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