All Comments on 'Raven's Dad Pt. 01'

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mitchawamitchawa27 days ago

A post-orgasmic mug of warm, sweet coffee remembered as Jay exploded into Raven while grenades of pleasure bombarded her. Incredibly great use of words to paint a picture of a female awaiting the pleasure she'd seen in her memory. It was well-written with great work pictures that made this story stand- out among the rest of those submitted in this category. The future stands as open as a warm bathrobe.

Bianca_PBianca_P24 days agoAuthor

Aw! Thank you so much, mitchawa. Always nice to be appreciated.

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