All Comments on 'Ready to Please Ch. 03'

Great Job!!!

I love the addition of the femdom aspect.

Thank you for writing and posting here.

She needs to put his cock in Chastity

Really nice (and logical) direction that this story is taking. Chastity would seem to be the next step. He's already at Ms. Nikki's service, so having her become his keyholder would make sense here. Really enjoying this. Thanks and keep up the good work.

Still a good premise.

Much too brusque.

Hardly erotic at all. No foreplay. No preliminaries. No joint enjoyment. No kissing. No playing with her breasts. Her ass. And the very least there should have been was some manipulating his cock with her hands, and then her mouth, even if she wouldn't let him cum until he'd given her several orgasms.

Just wham, bam.

Two stars.