by sosense101
You should introduce pee drinking and watersports into the story plot to keep guys like us on edge. Nice work.
Really don't get why a perfectly good pussy worship story has to devolve into cock cages, leashes, pain and humiliation. That always kills this kind of erotica for me. It's like the author assumes that a man has to be degraded to enjoy pleasuring a woman. The first two chapters were great, but then it became a bdsm/slavery/humiliation tale and turned me right off.