All Comments on 'Rebuilding Eden Ch. 04'

I am impressed by the very mature way that everyone (other than Cami's parents) behaves in this story. This whole situation could not (realistically) have been successfully navigated without such maturity and love. I am not sure I have ever seen a group that behaved as well as this group of people.

I am interested to see where you take this. Please continue.

I am a little disappointed - the story has become too crowded with, in my opinion, too many characters with too many personal issues. I would like to have seen more focus on the three main players and their interactions. There has been no development of the Tom-Cami-Beth throuple beyond the previous chapter - has it gone as far as it can go?

Also a typo: “ "I am ready, Tom," she whispered. My queue.” No, my cue!

But looking forward to the next instalment.

Cheers, Roger from NZ