All Comments on 'Reconnecting With an Old Flame Pt. 01'

by Dazman

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Good premise.

Rushed sex.

Needed much more playing/foreplay.

Sex is too automatic. Too mechanical. Needed more 'getting reacquainted' with each other before moving ahead.

Four stars.

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