All Comments on 'Recruiting Coordinator Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
awesome!

really great stuff! great social commentary and some nice sex mixed in

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
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Lacks the struggle of the heroine that's present in your older FBI agent Kim story...therefore not as erotic.

neosteeledneosteeledover 12 years ago

Looks to be an intriguing start!

HogwashHogwashalmost 7 years ago
Good work!

I think you should slow the pacing down a bit, though. Very hot promise and well-delivered but more details of the sex would make the story a 6 or 7 (instead of the 5 stars I just gave you).

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