All Comments on 'Red Swallow Ch. 04'

by BJGoodhead

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Renee_BRenee_Babout 4 years ago
<3 this Series!

Your writing is amazing!! You have me on the edge of my seat for more!

cbrooks122000cbrooks122000about 4 years ago
Brilliant

I really an growing into this story. Sort of intrigue, great, keep writing its brilliant.

coyote62coyote62about 4 years ago

Yes-!! Keep it coming!! Loving this series!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Enjoying red swallow

The patience of developing and evolving Desiree make this story especially hot. You’ve got me hooked and I’m hoping there will be more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
NEED MORE

I really like the characters and the lead role and how this story is unfolding. I would love to have more from you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Just love,love,love

I am just fascinated so far with this story. When Dustin/ Desiree realized he/she was seeing Adam the man who had hired him at Smith Financial International after all the sexual relations between them I would have thought that Adam would have offered something to Dustin/Desiree for the loss of her/his job from his company ( whether it be in a monetary or disciplinary measures to those for his firing.

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Writer always interested in developing the back-story and paying attention to detail. (Or at least I try...) Am currently Writing “Torment”; a voluntary consensual femdom series. Still Developing book 3 of “Jewel Delacroix’s” story.

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