by Lost_Yonder
I like the story, but:
There needed to be a better way to indicate the secretary's flashback.
I find it completely unrealistic that reesa overreacts to a question of kinkiness, but is then more than willing to let her naked sister masturbate in front of her boyfriend
Why am I sensing a incest vibe did Steven father mess with his sister? Is Tessa bisexual and is their incest in that family as well. I wonder what was that look about Gram gave Steven? Looking forward to the update.
You lost me at Stephen's interest in Tessa. Major let down.
Makes him look like a 40 year old pervert. Also NO SISTER would allow her sibling to be naked and masturbating in front of her man! It seems like Ressa is not enough for Stephen. He is trying to poke her in the hinney, trying to get her to swing and would even want to do her sister....just too weird. Messed up a great story! DAMN
As a male, I think I understand your point of view, but I also think Stephen should be given some credit for resisting Tessa as much as he has. I don't know how he was able to keep his hands off her during the hot tub scene. I doubt I could have, in real life. As written, she seemed irresistibly beautiful, and irresistibly sexy.
I don't think I like where this is going. I really like Tessa with Stephen, but I think there is more to her story. Please return and complete.
I have to agree with some of the other readers, regarding Tessa. If Reesa is "really" in love with Stephen she would not even think having her sister naked in front of her man. This story should I my opinion wrapped up after the whole scandal and them getting back together. I can understand the whole Tessa teasing Stephen verbally; however, what real woman in her right mind is going to allow her sister to push-up on her man. This story went way left. Tessa should have lost her fellowship she should have been prepared for the fallout of her actions.
I understand sisters are close but somethings were questionable I really liked this story initally but then it went on a downward spiral to something more of a boreder line sharing a man and sister on sitter action just got a bit weird and storyline kinda fell apart but I'm haning on hope you do finish it.
“White supremacist group”, suuuuuure. that is so lame! I liked the story at first and then you had to throw that in which was utterly completely stupid. I quit reading at that point. Sounds to me like from some of the other comments that the things just going downhill from there anyway. By the way I spent 25 years in Washington at some pretty high levels and a lot of this just doesn’t hold up