All Comments on 'Refashioned Pt. 04'

You’re not making a slave, you’re making a zombie. The only difference she isn’t saying “Braaiiins”, she saying “fuuuuuuck”.

I know, why not just lobotomize her, isnt that what you really want? Someone do compliant and docile and accepting of every punishment you can dole out. Maybe you can use her as a human punching bag to work out your frustration.

God damn, I hate stories that reduce their protagonists to mindless fucking cattle.

You are a bit harsh. The main point of the story is for women to get brainwashed. She's not becoming a zombi, this is just her state when highly aroused. I am pretty sure she will remain more than able to act convincingly and draw other women into the flock, just like Lauren.

I agree anonymous not to mention it’s a story with the intention of aiding in making one hot, screaming even fuming with the desire to be pleasured and personally I think it does just that. J/s