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"Ahem," said a voice suddenly, behind the man who held Reina's leg trapped. Reina craned her head to look past the soldier, and she couldn't believe her eyes.
"Ellis!" she exclaimed. She couldn't believe it. There was her boss, standing there with arms crossed and a disapproving expression on his face. He looked a little different, thinner but still rounder and softer than the men around him, and of course he was dressed as the locals, although in fancier attire. The soldiers stopped touching Reina and turned to look at Ellis, then the one in front of her stiffened and backed away.
"Sorry, sir," said the soldier to Ellis. Then he quickly gestured at his two friends. When they didn't immediately respond, he hissed at them. "Look, stupid," he said quietly, gesturing at his upper right chest. He must have been referring to the small red cloth that was tied to Ellis' tunic, but whatever it was, the soldiers immediately left Reina and moved away into the crowd. Reina raised an eyebrow, wondering what it was about Ellis that made these soldiers give way so easily. He wasn't an imposing figure by any stretch, quite the opposite.
"Hello Reina," said Ellis, smiling warmly as he moved closer. "I like your outfit," he added, giving her naked form a leisurely inspection with his eyes.
Yup, that was Ellis alright, thought Reina, but she'd never been so happy to see her boss.
- COMMENTS
Anonymous5 months agoSurprising. 1) I normally avoid stories longer than three pages, and 2) I normally avoid fantasy stories. I liked this.
thomas_deanabout 1 year agoTanuki in Reina's story has adopted the new world of revived slavery inaugurated by John Doe Stories in the Sandy Foot Girl series. The form of dystopic futurism where easy credit and liberal bankruptcy evolve into a form of imprisonment for debt.
Before Indentured Servitude was abolished in the US a person could apprentice themselves to a master to secure a debt, cost of passage to America was a frequent debt secured or for training in a craft.
We're told Reina's mother indentured herself to secure her husband's debts in the hope that her husband could raise the money to redeem her, He fails. Reina herself fears an attraction to the world of slavery.
Finding herself in a costume shop, she finds herself persuaded to don a sheer slave girl outfit which left nothing to the imagination. Viewing herself in the mirror, Reina tumbles into the world of slavery.
Tanuki makes some familiar observations from the Sandy Foot series: clothes make the person, the subservience holds a strange attraction.
Anonymousover 1 year agoFor clarity I have read the first three chapters. And agree completely with the previous comments. I am a fan of the Joe Doe stories. I'm also a fan of the Gorean series. Your alternate universe spin is delightful. I will admit that I'm disappointed that Reina's sister didn't make the trip. I'll also admit that I'd prefer Reina fail to clear her name before being sold and branded. It'd also be fun if Ellis not only bought her but that he was the one who set her up. The only thing that seems out of place is the 20-year sentence. That's not consistent with Gorean culture. There slavery is permanent. Especially for submissive like Reina. All that said you're the writer and should finish as you wish.
DonSocratesover 1 year agoThis is awesome! I'm glad you're back and I really hope to see more of this soon. Everything you write is both super hot and well written, you should be very proud of your work!
Anonymousover 1 year agoIts so great to see you back! You are one of my favorite authors, precious few people write like you do. You have a rare ability to write believably submissive characters as protagonists while still giving them agency in their story. While I'm looking forward to more Agent in Distress I can already tell that this new story will be fantastic in and of itself; I'd be happy with either of them, getting both is phenomenal! To be honest you'd have to try to write something I wouldn't love, your works are both staggeringly sex and engaging as stories. I wish you the best of luck in both your writing and your life in general, I hope you are doing well!
