All Comments on 'Reluctant Submission Ch. 10'

Wonderful story & I can't wait for more! One favor please...a little more attention payed to the Dominants names. We're mixing up Kane & Klein in all the chapters.

yeah ive gone through all the chapters and they arent getting mixed up, maybe your just getting confused? sometimes it switches from past to present so maybe thats where the confusion is, remember Kane is the dead so he's still going to be mentioned either way

But like Martiniman, I do see a couple instances of mixups between Klein and Kane.

Chapter 8:

Faith was a good friend of Kane. Faith was a frequent visitor to Klein's home before he died. She went to him for advice and guidance. It was her who first mentioned Felix to Kane.

Chapter 5: When Isobel first offered Klein to have a look at the new slave he jumped at the chance. He had read all the stories in the papers, heard all the rumours behind Klein's death.

DEFINITELY not enough to confuse me or turn me off of the story, but I do see what he's saying. LOVE the story and plot, and will be looking forward to more. Klein looks like he will be an excellent Master for Felix!

Great job, happy to see another chapter up. keep them cumming:P

I have been waiting for this chapter for SO long. I understand that story telling and writing is a delicate process, but it seems as though the authors on this site take CENTURIES to post chapters. They are always worth the wait, but it kills me waiting so long.

just submitted chapter 11 finally! hope it will be worth the wait