All Comments on 'Ren - Shades of Grey Ch. 09'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
On Pins and Needles!

Your story just keeps getting better and better. I can't wait to see who the father is (I just hope it's not Wilson or Hawk!). It's nice to know that Jake does seem to have a conscience. At first, I thought he was going to be the one that formed an attachment to Janey. Please don't keep us waiting so long for the next chapter. Your writing is truly terrific!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
GREAT

Love this story. Been waiting and waiting for more. I hope you get the next one out faster!

TricialenTricialenover 15 years ago
Tense

Waiting to find out what will happen is very nerve wracking! I didn't even want to like this story when it first start but I couldn't stay away and now I'm hooked. I so want Janey to be with Ren even though he has had laspes of judgement. But Adam is a sweetheart. And you're a great writer to make me care. Can't wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
sooooo on the edge of my seat...

Im actually on holiday in canada just now, and have scoured the streets to find a internet cafe to come on here and check for everything ive missed in the last week...and boy im glad i did...Its sooo tense!!! Looking forward to the next installment! Sacrificedangel.xx

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great Story

More Please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Must have more!

Stop being a tease.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
more please!

ive followed this story for so long.

i love it dearly and i've came to love and hate some of the characters.

i hope your next chapter is out soon

naughty11206naughty11206over 15 years ago
more

Can't wait for the next chapter. I hope you update soon. ^_^

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Waiting ......

What are you waiting for!!!!!!!!! We are dying here! Despite being a captive and forced to have sex with strangers...... it wasn't like that with Ren, she actually welcomed his advances. So I do hope that they can be together. How? With her whole family and Adam knowing what part Ren played in her tragedy....I don't know! Please let the baby be Ren's! And as far as Jake is concerned he needs to get as far as he can from Hawk! He's twisted!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

It still feels like she has no control in her life. I do know that the contraception device is not always effective, I have a beautiful granddaughter who was conceived despite the implant her mom had.

Love your stories on to the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago

I’m more than a little in love with James.

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