All Comments on 'Ren - Shades of Grey Ch. 10'

by Mygypsy

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sacrificedangelsacrificedangelover 15 years ago
Very good!

I've been looking forward to see what happened next, and you dont disappoint. This story is heartbreaking, absolutely heartbreaking and you write it well. It feels as though we are in the courtroom with Janey, feeling her fear, and seeing her rock back and forth. Its so sad, but a brilliant story none the less.

kvertedkvertedover 15 years ago
love it.

i love this story. i sometimes reread it from start to where you are now.

do you know when you'll be able to post again? or an estimated time?

TricialenTricialenover 15 years ago
Still Loving It

You write with such elegance and with an insight into a woman's heart. I feel like I'm there, with Janey, in the courtroom staring at the monster who took away her identity and her soul. Ren's gentleness with her was heart wrenching. Hawk not only took her innocence but took away her confidence in herself, who she was, what she wanted. And to see that he still has power over her is scary. Her brothers emotions get to me too. I'm very glad that I stuck with this story, even though at times it's very hard to read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Excellent as Usual

I agree with the other three comments left here earlier. I absolutely love this story. The characters are so real and I feel every emotion as well (except, of course, for Hawk, Wilson and Seth). I've been eagerly waiting for this chapter and you did not disappoint...you never do. I'm glad Janey's mom sees the chemistry between Janey and Ren. I can't decide who I want her to end up with. I just love both Adam and Ren. Of course, if Janey goes off with Adam, you could start a new series on Ren and his future after the trial. Hint Hint I just can't get enough of Ren. You are truly a gifted writer..always leaving us wanting more. I can't wait to see what happens next. I hope you won't keep us in suspense long. Kim in the USA

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Always

I have always loved this story. I fell in love with Ren a long time ago, and to see him now, not to mention Matty I had forgotten about him but now I would LOVE for someone to put a hand on his shoulder and say hey dude its cool. I really hope that Janey in the end can find the strength to testify that will go a LONG way to healing her!

SmallwandaSmallwandaover 15 years ago
2:30am is not the best time to read your work.

Or maybe it is the best time. You have always been able to get to me with this story. I find myself wishing I could be there with Janey and her family just to add my surport and love to her bleeding soul. Well done Gypsy. Ps Congrats on the grandbaby.

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