All Comments on 'Reporter Lucy Profiles CEO Ch. 04'

This however...

"Amy here is not like Charlotte yet, who is a bit of a pain slut and has learnt to get pleasure from punishment. Amy is still training and cannot take a great deal of punishment well, at least not yet."

Just no, absofuckinglutely NO. By saying that you're declaring that all subs will derive pleasure from pain. So Charlotte is a bit of a pain slut, for her that’s great it does not however mean that Amy or anyone else will or should be the same.

As for apologising for playing with herself in the shower without permission?? Seriously? You don’t need a lame excuse to get her involved.

Thanks for reading and the comments. Sorry if that's how you interpreted but was not intended like that. I know everyone is not a pain slut, was just meant to mean she is still a new slave and will take more training to take higher levels of pain, whether she enjoys it or not.

And I didn't feel it was an excuse, she was already subbing at that point and the pressure and control made her admit to her earlier arousal. But again, hope you enjoy the rest as it goes on, feel free to reach out and contact in private.

It's a fantasy! Drive On, Reporter Lucy! More chapters please!

As the title says: I see possibilities. It's a fantasy (I think) so it can go anywhere. Keep it plausible so we can all hope the fantasy comes true one day ;-)

Really enjoying the journey, so erotic a great fantasy keep it going, looking forward to future developments.

I really enjoyed the last couple of chapters, in particular how you managed to have Lucy submit so fast and yet in a realistic way. In many stories, I imagine because of the tropes of the genre, it feels that these sudden submissions are a little too abrupt, resulting in a somewhat superficial take on the act, even for a fantasy. In this case, though, at first there is a fascination, sure, but it is only a final push that does the trick, and only because it is a powerful one: the guilt for what is happening to Amy. At least, that's how I interpreted it. Keep on writing, please!

P.S. Again there are some editing issues: there is some narration in the present, around the middle.

A very typical Dom, always plans within plans and mindfuckery.

Thanks for sharing

Tess (uk)

again, grammatical problems notwithstanding, this is a delicious story.