All Comments on 'Rescuing a Snow Angel Ep. 03'

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arrowglassarrowglassabout 3 years ago
Really good storyline!!!!

Enjoying the characters...the plot..sure hope you continue it as it has real possibilities!

ArdieffArdieffabout 3 years ago

The plot thickens!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

4 months early? Maybe 4 weeks, but at 4 months early the baby weighs less than 13 ounces. Not viable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Intriguing! Great buildup and interesting subplots, w/realistic characters Hope you contnue.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Great potential for furthering this story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Carry on, carry on!!!!! You have crafted a yarn that could legitimately go in at least 6 directions......so far. Any of which would be a fun piece to read. If you ever thought of sci-fi, specifically alternative universe and historical fiction; look up the 1632 universe. More specifically the Grantville Gazette. It's a fan-fic paying site.

Best Regards,

Paul

"Brave Rifles"

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

FYI. Queue is waiting in line. An alternate spelling is que.

Cue is to signal for something to happen.

Tc

clearcreekclearcreekabout 2 years ago

If it moves, salute it. If it doesn't move, pick it up. If you cannot pick it up, paint it white!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

As before, Very Enjoyable and easy reading. A great balance of people / characters and activities.

THANKS !

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I followed the 'orphan to soldier' path that many others have. Found myself embroiled in the Vietnam mess - on the wrong side of the POW trauma. I lost some fingers and damaged a hand over there. Coming home to an unwelcoming nation, I stayed low and out of sight - still avoid...

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