by dmallord
Enjoying the characters...the plot..sure hope you continue it as it has real possibilities!
4 months early? Maybe 4 weeks, but at 4 months early the baby weighs less than 13 ounces. Not viable.
Intriguing! Great buildup and interesting subplots, w/realistic characters Hope you contnue.
Carry on, carry on!!!!! You have crafted a yarn that could legitimately go in at least 6 directions......so far. Any of which would be a fun piece to read. If you ever thought of sci-fi, specifically alternative universe and historical fiction; look up the 1632 universe. More specifically the Grantville Gazette. It's a fan-fic paying site.
Best Regards,
Paul
"Brave Rifles"
FYI. Queue is waiting in line. An alternate spelling is que.
Cue is to signal for something to happen.
Tc
If it moves, salute it. If it doesn't move, pick it up. If you cannot pick it up, paint it white!
As before, Very Enjoyable and easy reading. A great balance of people / characters and activities.
THANKS !