All Comments on 'Revelations'

Damn, woman. That was the single best s/m story I have ever read. Most s/m stories are simplistic torture porn trying to dress up as erotica. This is erotica. It has plenty of heat and has everything else as well. I could list what you did correctly, but that would be retelling it as everything is perfect. You not only aroused me, you made me cry. Thank you. A sky full of stars for you.

I loved it. The characters were real and the narrator's emotions seemed very real. Nice one.

He's a complete and utter jackass.

He said he's a complete and utter jackass. And I agree Gave this a 5

I think this is an amazing piece of BDSM erotica. It's not supposed to be romantic. If you want romance, go read Nicholas Sparks. This is an exchange between an experienced dominant and a younger, less-experienced submissive. Some people enjoy receiving pain. I don't think that makes the person giving them that pain a 'jackass'. Bravo Lewna! You have talent, girl! I hope to read more from you soon!

Please keep writing!

I thought this story was well written. I was stroking myself at the end.

They really have a good D/s dynamic. You painted the trust and love they had for eachother nicley.