All Comments on 'Revenge of the Maids'

Where's the rest of the story? No beginning and no ending.

its just a short excerpt describing one of the scenes in the sexfight between the maids and the madame of the house, there is a pic that goes with it, but apparently can't be published with the excerpt. I agree the story needs a beginning and an end, I may add that, but the intent was just to describe a scene, not an entire story. thx for the input

Read earlier without comment; just finished again. Wonderfully erotic scenario/scene that could be the trailer for a full length feature — hopeful. This piece and vampire piece very well done; no wasted lines/spaces. Hope you continue to share your vivid imagination. 5 🌟

Thx Migbird, I do have more to share, was hoping that there would be an audience for it here, and it appears that there is, so be on the look out for more.